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	<title>Comments on: Herald Phunnies #3</title>
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	<description>Always Fairly Unbalanced</description>
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		<title>By: No one of consequence</title>
		<link>http://alphavilleherald.com/2005/08/herald_phunnies.html/comment-page-1#comment-45344</link>
		<dc:creator>No one of consequence</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Aug 2005 21:21:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Plywood ain&#039;t too shabby. Nice link.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Plywood ain&#8217;t too shabby. Nice link.</p>
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		<title>By: No One Else Of Consequence</title>
		<link>http://alphavilleherald.com/2005/08/herald_phunnies.html/comment-page-1#comment-45343</link>
		<dc:creator>No One Else Of Consequence</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Aug 2005 13:17:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Have you looked at &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.plywoodcomic.com&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Plywood&lt;/a&gt; yet?
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Have you looked at <a href="http://www.plywoodcomic.com" rel="nofollow">Plywood</a> yet?</p>
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		<title>By: No one of consequence</title>
		<link>http://alphavilleherald.com/2005/08/herald_phunnies.html/comment-page-1#comment-45342</link>
		<dc:creator>No one of consequence</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Aug 2005 22:06:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Constructive criticism:

I concur with the other posters that the comics are indeed &#039;not funny&#039;. &#039;Look at the newbie!&#039; cracks are fairly lame in any context, and generally will only be &#039;got&#039; by folks that play your game. However, instead of slaying the comics entirely, perhaps there are ways they may be improved?

For example, currently we have comics that resemble a quick, punchline+rimshot joke. There&#039;s alot of space for setup, but this is generally wasted with a cheap joke. I would suggest working on a more story-based comic form. For example, more character development into the currently faceless/nameless builder-guy, as well as the addition of other recurring characters based on SL stereotypes. For example, a Mafia-type guy, a fashion diva, an &#039;escort&#039;, a zealous Alliance-guy, various furries, nonhumanoid freaks, etc. By this, I don&#039;t mean just stick different avatars into the picture, but to actually flesh out their backgrounds and motivations beyond the a one-sentence stereotype, then throw them into comedic situations together.

Another point of improvement could be on the background setting of the comic itself. We have a plain grassy plain with no features in the landscape. Perhaps a more appropriate environs for our nameless tinker could be a strangely decorated laboratory with all sorts of odd things occuring in the backround? Or even a sandbox area, where we can see newbies working on other projects in the background (which could make for background gags).

Finally, my last suggestion is very simple - Exaggeration.

Seeing a furry stuck on a Katamari ball, with the furry swearing to kill the creator: Cute.

Seeing a Katamari ball rolling throughout the world, with panels of the ball rolling over and picking up various SL landmarks that people recognize, love, and hate: Better.

Seeing a Katamari ball, with those landmarks still stuck to it, picking up that 5-story tall furry while rolling over the Furry Island: Hilarious (from my sick sense of humor, anyway).

Seeing same furries with pitchforks and torches beating a path through the apocalyptic landscape, Mad Max-style (complete with hockey masks, shotguns, and junker cars), on a quest to kill the builder of the Katamari: Icing on the cake.

Point being, it&#039;s not the comic style is neccessarily bad, it just needs alot of work in the writing department.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Constructive criticism:</p>
<p>I concur with the other posters that the comics are indeed &#8216;not funny&#8217;. &#8216;Look at the newbie!&#8217; cracks are fairly lame in any context, and generally will only be &#8216;got&#8217; by folks that play your game. However, instead of slaying the comics entirely, perhaps there are ways they may be improved?</p>
<p>For example, currently we have comics that resemble a quick, punchline+rimshot joke. There&#8217;s alot of space for setup, but this is generally wasted with a cheap joke. I would suggest working on a more story-based comic form. For example, more character development into the currently faceless/nameless builder-guy, as well as the addition of other recurring characters based on SL stereotypes. For example, a Mafia-type guy, a fashion diva, an &#8216;escort&#8217;, a zealous Alliance-guy, various furries, nonhumanoid freaks, etc. By this, I don&#8217;t mean just stick different avatars into the picture, but to actually flesh out their backgrounds and motivations beyond the a one-sentence stereotype, then throw them into comedic situations together.</p>
<p>Another point of improvement could be on the background setting of the comic itself. We have a plain grassy plain with no features in the landscape. Perhaps a more appropriate environs for our nameless tinker could be a strangely decorated laboratory with all sorts of odd things occuring in the backround? Or even a sandbox area, where we can see newbies working on other projects in the background (which could make for background gags).</p>
<p>Finally, my last suggestion is very simple &#8211; Exaggeration.</p>
<p>Seeing a furry stuck on a Katamari ball, with the furry swearing to kill the creator: Cute.</p>
<p>Seeing a Katamari ball rolling throughout the world, with panels of the ball rolling over and picking up various SL landmarks that people recognize, love, and hate: Better.</p>
<p>Seeing a Katamari ball, with those landmarks still stuck to it, picking up that 5-story tall furry while rolling over the Furry Island: Hilarious (from my sick sense of humor, anyway).</p>
<p>Seeing same furries with pitchforks and torches beating a path through the apocalyptic landscape, Mad Max-style (complete with hockey masks, shotguns, and junker cars), on a quest to kill the builder of the Katamari: Icing on the cake.</p>
<p>Point being, it&#8217;s not the comic style is neccessarily bad, it just needs alot of work in the writing department.</p>
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		<title>By: RB</title>
		<link>http://alphavilleherald.com/2005/08/herald_phunnies.html/comment-page-1#comment-45341</link>
		<dc:creator>RB</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Aug 2005 19:42:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>How bout call the comic daily life in second life? Cause it&#039;s not a comedy at all, more of a snapshot of events most SLers experience at one time or another.

- RB.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>How bout call the comic daily life in second life? Cause it&#8217;s not a comedy at all, more of a snapshot of events most SLers experience at one time or another.</p>
<p>- RB.</p>
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		<title>By: Urizenus</title>
		<link>http://alphavilleherald.com/2005/08/herald_phunnies.html/comment-page-1#comment-45340</link>
		<dc:creator>Urizenus</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Aug 2005 20:54:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yah, it probably creates unfair expectations when I bill these as Herald Phunnies, so as usual it&#039;s my bad, but crimey, what am I supposed to call them.  Oh right, comics.  Sort of like American Splendor comics, for example.  Same idea:  graphic illustrations of mundane every day life situations that sometimes make you smile and sometimes make you scratch your head and think you must be missing something.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yah, it probably creates unfair expectations when I bill these as Herald Phunnies, so as usual it&#8217;s my bad, but crimey, what am I supposed to call them.  Oh right, comics.  Sort of like American Splendor comics, for example.  Same idea:  graphic illustrations of mundane every day life situations that sometimes make you smile and sometimes make you scratch your head and think you must be missing something.</p>
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		<title>By: Brian Mifflin</title>
		<link>http://alphavilleherald.com/2005/08/herald_phunnies.html/comment-page-1#comment-45339</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian Mifflin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Aug 2005 20:43:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My intention with these are more of an expression of everday life in SL than anything else. Hamlet Linden worded it great when he said it was a comic blog. It is, and that&#039;s how I view it. Any laughs I get are icing on the cake. Bear with me if some aren&#039;t meant to be funny, or even if they are, the jokes are only visible to my friends and I.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My intention with these are more of an expression of everday life in SL than anything else. Hamlet Linden worded it great when he said it was a comic blog. It is, and that&#8217;s how I view it. Any laughs I get are icing on the cake. Bear with me if some aren&#8217;t meant to be funny, or even if they are, the jokes are only visible to my friends and I.</p>
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		<title>By: Urizenus</title>
		<link>http://alphavilleherald.com/2005/08/herald_phunnies.html/comment-page-1#comment-45338</link>
		<dc:creator>Urizenus</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Aug 2005 20:10:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like them because they remind me of Hugh Beumont jokes.  You know... what did Hugh get for his birthday?  Answer: 6 golf balls and a cardigan sweater.

I also like them because they shed light on everyday life in SL.

I also like the fact that people bitch about them.  That&#039;s how I can tell they belong in the Herald!

But I&#039;m not gonna say I die laughing when I read them.

And yeah, if you guys got better, show us yours, lol.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like them because they remind me of Hugh Beumont jokes.  You know&#8230; what did Hugh get for his birthday?  Answer: 6 golf balls and a cardigan sweater.</p>
<p>I also like them because they shed light on everyday life in SL.</p>
<p>I also like the fact that people bitch about them.  That&#8217;s how I can tell they belong in the Herald!</p>
<p>But I&#8217;m not gonna say I die laughing when I read them.</p>
<p>And yeah, if you guys got better, show us yours, lol.</p>
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		<title>By: Ranius DeMorrella</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ranius DeMorrella</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Aug 2005 15:46:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lance Mirabeau shut up, its good comedy, just appreciate it or ignore it but dont insult it.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lance Mirabeau shut up, its good comedy, just appreciate it or ignore it but dont insult it.</p>
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		<title>By: Roberta Dalek</title>
		<link>http://alphavilleherald.com/2005/08/herald_phunnies.html/comment-page-1#comment-45336</link>
		<dc:creator>Roberta Dalek</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Aug 2005 15:30:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>These really aren&#039;t very good
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These really aren&#8217;t very good</p>
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		<title>By: One Song</title>
		<link>http://alphavilleherald.com/2005/08/herald_phunnies.html/comment-page-1#comment-45335</link>
		<dc:creator>One Song</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Aug 2005 14:53:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think the funnies are the lamest thing the Herald ever resulted to. No offence intended but please for the love of God kill the damn funnies, cheers!
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think the funnies are the lamest thing the Herald ever resulted to. No offence intended but please for the love of God kill the damn funnies, cheers!</p>
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