Comments on: Once More http://alphavilleherald.com/2008/01/once-more.html Always Fairly Unbalanced Tue, 04 Oct 2016 13:18:56 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1 By: RipOff Rick http://alphavilleherald.com/2008/01/once-more.html/comment-page-1#comment-17703 RipOff Rick Thu, 17 Jan 2008 22:59:26 +0000 http://localhost/wp_2/?p=899#comment-17703 "That's probably because it's a blatant ripoff. The first two lines use the same rhyme, and "once more" is clearly a ripoff of "nevermore"." Only while Poe engaged the senses with his clever writing, this poem reeks of a pathetic wanna-be role-playing poet who's a tad too engaged in Second Life and needs to see some sunlight. “That’s probably because it’s a blatant ripoff. The first two lines use the same rhyme, and “once more” is clearly a ripoff of “nevermore”.”

Only while Poe engaged the senses with his clever writing, this poem reeks of a pathetic wanna-be role-playing poet who’s a tad too engaged in Second Life and needs to see some sunlight.

]]> By: anon http://alphavilleherald.com/2008/01/once-more.html/comment-page-1#comment-17702 anon Thu, 17 Jan 2008 10:48:13 +0000 http://localhost/wp_2/?p=899#comment-17702 That's probably because it's a blatant ripoff. The first two lines use the same rhyme, and "once more" is clearly a ripoff of "nevermore". That’s probably because it’s a blatant ripoff. The first two lines use the same rhyme, and “once more” is clearly a ripoff of “nevermore”.

]]> By: Ecocandle Riel http://alphavilleherald.com/2008/01/once-more.html/comment-page-1#comment-17701 Ecocandle Riel Tue, 15 Jan 2008 19:03:38 +0000 http://localhost/wp_2/?p=899#comment-17701 I loved it. The cadence reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's the Raven. Well done. More please. I loved it. The cadence reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe’s the Raven. Well done. More please.

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